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Hello, this is my first try of a concept. Do share and tell your thoughts on this.
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My critique is mostly going to be about the text (there is not a lot more to criticize about this), but I hope it helps anyway.

First of all: Why is the d in loved blue? I can't seem to find a good reason for it, it seems pretty random. It's also a different blue than the blue of the logo, which is something you should try to avoid (You can use different blues, but these are just too alike).

Next off: You should use proper capitalization. We have spent.. We liked it... It just looks a lot neater.

Also, I'd add "We" to the last sentence, because it's unclear who's saying that. It kind of looks like a single person is saying this, which is another thing you want to avoid, because a team worked on this. Oh, and change the "much" for "a lot of"; much time might be grammatically correct (i'm not entirely sure), but "a lot of" just looks and sounds a bit better.

By the way, assuming that people do not read the terms and conditions (however true) is not something you should do; Both because there's actually people who do read them, and because, as a company, you have to make sure people agree with reading these, as it's obliged for using the program.

It also looks like the "I agree blah blah" and the "next" aren't equally spaced from the sides of the windows.

Hope this helps. :)
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Love the idea of taking the hate and turning it into something positive. Though it wont change anything =P

Most corporate companies will require their name to be used as a noun with uppercase. Also I would start the sentences with a upper case too. "We, Internet Explorer, Hope"

Not sure if English is your first language but "we have spent much time" doesn't sound proper. Try to use bigger words or a different way of saying it. "We have spent a great deal of time, We have spent a lot of time" Would be a different way of saying it.

Another thing is try to look at your alignment, the space between the left side and the check box should be equal to the pixel as the right side of next box and the ride side. Try to align the next button text to the button better. It's sitting to the right; the same goes with the whole design. The T the the left and the e to the right needs the same spacing. Also the spacing from the top of the logo to the top of the page needs to be the same as the spacing between the next button and the bottom of the page or whole thing could be pulled up a bit so the top spacing is equal to the spacing between it and the button part (terms, and next button)

I would recommend making the whole next button solid blue like the E. You want the user to click next and make them move forward so it being more prominent will help.

Looks great. Keep it up.

- Trevor Deal | trevordealdesign
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DevilishDB Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
OMG LOOK AT THIS
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THIS IS OFFICIAL TOO

I swear they got that off you
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:icondakoder:
DaKoder Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:omg:
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:iconlablayers:
LabLayers Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Student Interface Designer
By then, Photoshop CS7 would be out. :3
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:iconp4rm33t:
p4rm33t Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013
Very Nice!
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:iconmrtechnoholic:
MrTechnoholic Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Thank You Mate! :)
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:icondevilishdb:
DevilishDB Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
LOL I bet microsoft would never actually say stuff like that but it's true really!!!
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:iconmrtechnoholic:
MrTechnoholic Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Hehe, yeah! :D
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PureDesignzHD Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
hey dude nice work! though you may want to change "we liked it" since liked is past tense
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:iconmrtechnoholic:
MrTechnoholic Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Noted ;)
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:iconbendyson:
bendyson Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Looks amazing!
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:iconmrtechnoholic:
MrTechnoholic Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Thank You bendyson! Stay tuned buddy. Updates shortly ;)
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:iconbendyson:
bendyson Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
No Problem! Sent you a note :)
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:icontheintenseplayer:
theIntensePlayer Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
I love this!
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:iconmrtechnoholic:
MrTechnoholic Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Hey! Thanks, theIntensePlayer =)
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:iconntim007:
ntim007 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
Nice work ! What's the font used for "The browser you loved to hate" ?
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:iconmrtechnoholic:
MrTechnoholic Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Lobster 1.4 :) Thank You, Tim!
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ismailrawoot Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
I love the idea of admitting you were wrong and saying you'll do what you can to fix it, it's a bit of humanism that's present in mozilla and chrome but has thusfar been absent from IE.

Good luck Bro! Stay strong!
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:iconmrtechnoholic:
MrTechnoholic Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Seriously brotha, it has been absent from IE - what we can do is hope. Anyways, thanks for the good luck! :)
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bolito566 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
Hahaha! I love concepts with humor! :)
Good luck with that, friend.
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:iconmrtechnoholic:
MrTechnoholic Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Hehe, thank you Andre. :)
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:iconandreascy:
andreascy Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Professional General Artist
I LOVE it!! Simply adorable sir!! :thumbsup:
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:iconmrtechnoholic:
MrTechnoholic Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Thank You Andreas! Oops, gentlemen! =D
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:iconherioglyph:
Herioglyph Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It looks and feels like an IE screen. Never really used the program because 10 is just 9 with new buttons. But, it looks good anyways.
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:iconsamcaffeine:
samcaffeine Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
no its not
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:iconmrtechnoholic:
MrTechnoholic Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Yes, they presented a more flattened User Interface but also fixed some bugs and improved much on HTML5 and your dA profile picture is really nice =P
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Zoe0Shockwave0 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
Well it's minimalistic thats for sure. The space saving concept of your design is nice but it really does look just like Windows Vista & 7 and also like 8 in classic mode minus the start menu button. Try to aim for Microsoft Windows standard functionality in your design, afterall, looks really are one of the least important things for a good operating system. Good job though. Keep it up.
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MrTechnoholic Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
I just revamped this concept and it looks really modern now. When I find it good for an update, I'll do that. Thanks for the feedback! Really appreciated. =)
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:iconadmx:
admx Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
hehe, nice concept, keep it up! :la:
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:iconmissstar489:
MissStar489 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Funny sir, very funny.
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:iconmrtechnoholic:
MrTechnoholic Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Really?
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:iconmissstar489:
MissStar489 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yes "the browser you loved to hate" is priceless. That genius is hard to mach in its wit.
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HedgehogLoverForevr Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I used to use internet explorer but windows 8 makes it way too complicated
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:iconmrtechnoholic:
MrTechnoholic Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Really man? Maybe yes.. with the must make default browser and metro app.. yeah.
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:iconhehewuti:
Hehewuti Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Poor Internet Explorer, trying so hard to be one of the cool kids u.u

I want to tell you this is an awesome piece, but unfortunately I know absolutely nothing about design.
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:iconmrtechnoholic:
MrTechnoholic Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
It's alright brotha. Thank You! =D
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dAKirby309 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey! I saw this on the first page of top deviations for today, congrats! =P
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:iconmrtechnoholic:
MrTechnoholic Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
:P Really?
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ivica221 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
beautiful, when will you upload that I can download
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:iconmrtechnoholic:
MrTechnoholic Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
sure, soon! :)
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:iconc-mar1:
c-mar1 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
yeaaah i love to hate it but i used to (because of the D of loved) since ie10 :p
nice work dud B-)
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MrTechnoholic Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Thanks brotha B)
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TheWin7Freak Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
Looks very nice!
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:iconmrtechnoholic:
MrTechnoholic Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Thanks man!
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TheWin7Freak Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
You're welcome
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ZetaRarity Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Windows Blue....

It's quite an interesting concept you have there. ;)
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:iconmrtechnoholic:
MrTechnoholic Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Hehe, thank you! :D
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ZetaRarity Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome.
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